Looks pretty good, you might want to include boxes/lines for more things such as Qualities & Drawbacks, Metaphysics, Traits, and the lifting and encumbrance notes.

A few other bits:
- The first 2 rows in the Success Levels chart look thicker than the rows afterward.

- In the skills table, the skill name column uses too much space on the right side (too my eye anyway).

- The range modifiers needs some straightening; it's difficult to tell what modifier goes with what range category.

- Separate the Qualities and Drawbacks categories. I utterly hate that they often get listed together and find doing so pretty confusing.


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