I like the way Unisytem does their archetypes, which is mainly what you have there, I made the sheet a lot more detailed on purpose though, and now I believe I can call it done.

My players have a pretty strong focus on combat and I have had some issues fitting all combat info I wanted in there, possibly changing the maneuvers and weapons into a single block in the future, not yet sure, must print it, put it to use and see.

(updated link on the first post)
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