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Destiny's Calling: A Ravenwood Chronicle
Everyone spends the next couple of hours watching the video of the race. The footage doesn't reveal anything out of the ordinary, but this doesn't
stop Marc from trying every angle he can. Still no evidence of foul play but the footage begins ghosting after Dante hits his helmet on the boulder. Eric is
still at the hospital with Violet. He's running his hand through her hair when he notices that she has a burnt tattoo on her neck. The symbol is the Omega
letter, but modified. He begins searching the computer and the different Frat Houses that may have the modified symbol. He narrows the search down to one Frat
house; The Alpha Doma Tau Omega. He sends the information through email to the group and calls Dante and tells him about it. Dante decides he's going to go
ahead and hit the Fang Club in search for the group Violet was last seen with. Ben calls Marc and asks him to run a computer search on the Frat House and see
if he can link anything together. Marc agrees and begins to run his search.
Marc uses his computer skills and pulls up information on the Frat House finding it was established in the late 1800s and they were all (national) activated
at the same exact time and hour or so. Further study leads Marc to a link on one of the other Frat's website, clicking it redirects Marc to a newspaper
article talking about a serial killer in the 1960s called "The Frat House Killer." Marc studies the article close and finds out that he would leave
his bodies on the coastlines or near water with an Omega symbol cut out of the abdomen. he was captured and tried and the results leaving him on death row to
be executed several months after his arrest. The information as no other connections to the Frat House other than the last murder. He takes this information
with him and heads to meet up with the rest of the group that's meeting at Kip's.
Angelica has been studying the footage from the race when she gets a call. She looks at the number briefly and doesn't recognize it so she hits ignore.
A few minutes later she sees that she has a voicemail and checks it. On the voicemail it's a girl crying and screaming frantically asking for help, this
creeps Angelica out so she decides to head over to the Police Station and let them hear it and help her find out where the call was from. She leaves and begins
walking to the station. As she arrives its very quite but the doors are unlocked. She enters and sees a officer making himself coffee and pop tarts. She
approaches the receptionist desk and waits patiently. he finally turns her direction and asks how he can help her. The officer tells her he believes it's a
prank and not to worry about it, she gets upset and says some choice words and leaves. As she's walking down the street she gets a the creepy notion that
she is being followed so she calls Ben. Ben tells her to keep walking and that he is on his way to pick her up. They stay on the phone together. She eventually
gets closer to the local café Kip's Big Boy and heads there telling Ben that's where she'll be.
Meanwhile, Jason decides to do a little computer searching himself and looks up the Frat's webpage. He searches the galleries section to see if he can
find any pictures of the Frat Party that Violet came up missing at. He finds some and sees that Violet was in most of the pictures having fun. He prints them
out and then calls Jacquelyn up and sees if she would like to meet him at Kip's to go over the pictures since, she has 20-20 vision. She agrees and tells
him she'll meet him there. Jason packs up his backpack with the blown up pictures and heads to Kip's, jogging all the way there.
Elsewhere, Dante arrives at the Fang Club and begins to investigate and searches for any signs of the Frat House that is responsible for what happened with
Violet. He notices Ethan is there doing his own form of investigation dressed in what appears to be a Neo impersonator from the Matrix. Laughing he asks Ethan
what he was doing there and why he was dressed like that. Of course, Ethan explains his intentions of fitting in with the crowd. Dante tells him very clever
and the look is good on him, he should consider dressing like that more often. That's when Dante sees a guy sitting in the balcony, not exactly dressed as
a Goth, but looks like a natural, looking over the crowd. Dante gets closer to get a better look and notices the guy has the same tattoo that Eric said Violet
had on her neck. Curious, Dante leaves Ethan behind and heads up the stairs to talk with the guy. Dante is stopped by two Goth Girls acting as the guys
personal body guard. He tries to convince them that he needs to talk with the guy but they stand fast and don't budge. Dante begins to get frustrated and
tells them fine, if they wont let him talk then he will call the cops and tell them that he's involved with Violet's sexual assault. They laugh, so
Dante takes a step back and calls Detective Drake, Drake takes the information and tells Dante he'll check into it and thanks for the heads up. (the
detective left his card with them in the first Episode) Dante goes back to the two girls and then offers them a drink and to start over fresh and become
friends. They laugh at him and tell him he's "Pathetic." This aggrivates him even further so he heads down to where he was talking to Ethan at.
Ethan is gone and at that moment the lights in the club go off. This startles Dante. He wasn't expecting the lights to go out, and he starts for the door
to keep the guy from leaving. The bouncer at the door tells Dante that he either needs to be in the club or outside, he can't just stand around in the
entrance. Dante moves forward and that's when the hard hitting alternative metal or nu metal some call it music starts cranking through the amps. The band
on stage is called "Stoker" a vampire metal band. Strobe lights add to the eerie feeling of the Fang Club. The lights hit just right on the stage and
Dante sees the guy on stage singing and the two Goth Girl bodyguards are playing the Bass and Lead Guitar. Dante patiently waits for the band to exit the stage
so he can try to talk to the singer. The only problem is industrial smoke begins to blow through the club masking the bands stage exit. Dante unsuccessful
decides to meet up with his friends at the Kip's Cafe.
Ben is on his way to Kip's to meet Angelica, but continues to talk to her until she actually enters the cafe and meets with a waitress. As he's
pulling up into the driveway, he notices some person is standing in the shadows. He looks over to the person and just stares at them, until they turn and leave
the scene. Once he sees Angelica inside a moment of relief lifts from his shoulders. He enters and hooks up with Angelica, Jason and Jacquelyn. Ben tries
calling Ethan to invite him to join, but only gets his voicemail. Dante arrives a few moments after Marc. They all meet at their normal table and begin
discussions about what to do next. Angelica gets distracted by something outside so Ben turns and looks just as Angelica says there is someone out there
watching. This prompts Ben, Jason and Dante to go confront the guy out there. Marc and Angelica follow behind them.
The guy turns and starts to walk off really fast when Dante runs in front of him and stops him. They question the mysterious stranger and he tells them his
name is Jesse and his girlfriend works at Kips, he's out there waiting for her shift to be over. The group confirm what he says and then apologizes for
there confrontation. He tells them no problem and they head back in. ben tries calling Ethan again and still gets his voicemail. Dante tries calling Ethan
also, but gets the same thing as he begins feeling guilty for leaving him at the Fang Club. Ben passes a note over to Angelica asking her to help him
investigate next morning at thr Frat House and she accepts. A connection is formed on the singer of the band "Stoker," his name is Yorgon Romanvich.
Further study reveals that his real name is Devon Eiseley, the head of the fraternity they are investigating. The group is puzzled.
Before the Cast decide to call it a night, Angelica asks Marc to try and track the number that the frantic girl used to call from. Marc does and pinpoints
the number a pay phone on Beach Rd. A small highway that runs through town. They plan on investigating the area the next day. Ben still concerned about Ethan
tries calling him one last time and gets the same thing, the voicemail.
The next day Ben picks up Angelica and they go straight over to the Frat House. Ben tells Angelica to pose as he takes pictures of her in front of the
house. She smiles and starts posing. Ben begins snapping shots of everyone that is coming and going from the Frat House when he notices Devon and two girls
approach them. Devon invites Angelica to the night's Frat party, but she refuses. So Devon asks her again and this time she says yes. The girl turns to Ben
and invites him, he jumps and says most definitely that he'll be there. Devon and his girls leave. Ben calls everyone and tells them they were invited to
the Frat party and this could be an opportunity to investigate the Frat house. After his phone call he begins thinking of ways to find out what has happened to
Ethan. The group meets as they are discussing Ethan's disappearance, Jason speaks out states "What if he just got Lucky and is with some hot chick,
knocking the boots?" The group ponders on that comment and then it is said, "This is Ethan we are talking about..." Laughter begins. Then
someone in the group brings up the idea about tracking him through his cell phone's G.P.S.. Marc begins searching his laptop for the connection and gets a
bead on his G.P.S.. It is right off of Beach rd. in Ravenwood Park. The group decide that they will head over to the Park while on their way to investigate the
Meanwhile, back at the hospital Eric is asleep slouching over his laptop when he begins to wake up. Violet is awake and standing in front of the hospital
window looking out into the sky. To Eric's amazement he begins talking to her and informing her about what has happened. She thanks him for helping her and
staying with her while she was unconscious. He tells her it was his pleasure. She informs him after he explains about her condition and the events that
happened that she was told by the doctor and according to her charts she had a miscarriage and she was not raped. She tells him that it doesn't make sense,
because she has never been sexually active with anyone. This blows Eric's mind. He finishes his conversation with Violet and the details he calls Ben and
tells him what he found out. Ben says more mysteries to be solved. Ben tells Eric that they were invited to the Frat party. Eric says he'll be there to
help. The screen fades out and the show ends there, but with a Cut scene, which I'll write out later and post it.
Oct 7 08 6:08 AM
She informs him after he explains about her condition and the events that happened that she was told by the doctor and according to her charts she had a
miscarriage and she was not raped. She tells him that it doesn't make sense, because she has never been sexually active with anyone.
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Oct 8 08 9:23 PM
Written by Ron McNiel
At the Fang Club
"The music is slamming really hard and the strobe lights make it even harder to see."
Ethan is thinking while making his way through the club looking for clues.
"Violet was last seen here at the club, so this is where she must have been taken from." Ethan says as he wonders aimlessly through the club.
"Why did we even get involved, its not like we really knew her. Not to mention, me taking fashion tips from Dante. Way to go Ethan, you look like a Matrix
reject." "Well there goes Dante upstairs...he always forces his way into people's life.." Ethan states jokingly. "Maybe he can get the
answers that Eric wants, about what happened to Violet."
Ethan goes over to the bar watching Dante approach a guy who looks like he invented the whole Goth scene, a natural, surrounded by beautiful Goth girls. The
girls stop Dante before he gets to close to the guy.
"That's odd! Wow, Dante's not getting anywhere with those girls, unlike usual when it comes to their kind." Ethan says as he watches
Dante's attempts to get near the Goth god. "Now what's he doing, is that his cell phone?" Ethan asks himself as he squints his eyes to focus
through the smoke. "Yes, he must be getting a hold of Eric or even Ben, oh well, guess my work's done here."
Ethan pays for his spritzer and heads to the door when he notices a girl watching him. "Is she looking at me?" Ethan asks himself. The girl begins
to walk over to Ethan. "Well, now, she is, wow, maybe this look does wonders for myself, it got her attention and whew, man is she hot!" Ethan
whispers to himself in excitement. The girl moves closer to Ethan.
"Hi, I'm Daphne." as the girl holds out her hand anticipating a kiss on it from Ethan. Ethan begins to fumble with her hand which ends in a
hand shake. She giggles at him, as he haphazardly smiles back at her.
"I'm not usually good with introductions, oh, I'm Ethan, Ethan Crane...nice to meet you," he says as he shakes her hand consistently,
until he realizes that he's being foolish. "Oh, sorry." Ethan laughs. "Its quite alright, so were you fixing to leave?" Daphne asks.
"Yes, I didn't find what I was looking for and I have exams in the morning." Ethan replies back. "Oh, well you found me...and I was
wondering if you'd walk home with me or walk me home, I mean." Daphne asks. "Sure, why not, it could be dangerous out there, you know with ghost
and goblins lurking." Ethan says smiling. "Oh my!" Daphne says surprisingly. "What a freaking idiot! Why would you say something so nerdy
at this particular moment?" Ethan thinks to himself. Daphne moves her hand into Ethan's as they head for the door and the lights in the club go out.
The night air is crisp and the wind slightly blows, every star in the sky shine with florescent glows. The trees slowly sway back and forth as the wind
blows. A couple can be seen walking down the street to the park. Their laughter and giggles can be heard from a distance. Its clear that they have a new found
In the shadows, things lurk that the normal eye is not attuned to. Obviously blind to the shadows, the couple continue their night stroll into the park.
When the couple enters the park, they move towards the swings that sway with the wind. The girl sits down and stares up at her male friend. Her smoky grey
eyes flow with life as she looks at him smiling. He looks down then moves behind her and begins to push her on the swing. The old swing squeaks with each inch
of movement. Their laughter and happiness fill the night air.
Suddenly, they are startled by noises from the woods. They stop and begin to look around. Moments pass and nothing else is heard. The girl speaks up after
moments of silence. "I'm glad we're doing this," she says. "This must have been an act of God, I mean, its not everyday you find someone
that you have so much in common with," he replies back. The two smile at each other as they move in for a kiss. As their lips connect the sound of fast
movement moves through the woods. The couple startled, turn and look towards the woods. Growling can be heard. The girl gets off of the swing and frantically
grabs her boyfriend's arm and begins tugging on it. "We got to get out of here!" she says frantically. "Lets go, we have to move quickly, me
and wild dogs don't mix!" The two take off running as fast as they can to safety.
From the woods, the glare of the wild animal's eyes can be seen as the moon's light hits it. The creature begins chase. The guy grabs his girlfriend
and picks her up in hopes that they will move faster. The animal quickly gaining on them, he turns and sees that it's closing the distance. Not looking
where he's going the girl yells out, "Watch out for that rock!" As the guy turns his head back around, its to late as he trips sending her
through the air crashing into some bushes. The guy falls hitting his head on another rock. His eyesight begins to blur as the animal attacks. He's fighting
the animal off the best he can until he begins to loose consciousness, that's when he sees another animal attack the one attacking him. Growls followed by
biting sounds can be heard. A few moments later a loud yelp can be heard, then silence. He begins to black out and the last thing he sees is his
girlfriend's smoky grey eyes filled with tears. "Stay with me, it's going to be alright, I'm here.." she says. Nothing but blackness is
all he sees as he loses consciousness. Several times he begins to regain consciousness and hears arguments in a language he's not familiar with, maybe its
Hungarian, he's not sure as he loses consciousness again. He's pretty much out for the rest of the night, only occasionally awaking to the smell of
burning incenses and seeing candle light. Hours later, he awakens and begins to raise up only to be met with those smoky grey eyes and a voice so sweet and
gentle apologizing for his injuries, "I'm so sorry.." He dismisses the notions and says "No, its ok, it wasn't your fault," as he
puts his hand on her face, gently touching her. She smiles and leans down to kiss him. The two begin to embrace each other with great passion. She reaches over
fumbling around a night stand picking up a remote and turning on some gentle music. The scene fades out as the two passionately kiss.
The Next Morning...
Ethan awakens in an unfamiliar bed. Raising up he hits his head on the canopy post of the bed. Looking around very paranoid like, he begins asking himself
"Where the hell am I?" The bed is covered in satin sheets and he's in his boxers. Frantically he looks around the room for his clothes. Glancing
around he realizes he's in a girl's bedroom. "What the heck!, My spritzer must have been spiked!" He says loudly. Noises can be heard coming
from a bathroom. He turns and looks towards the bathroom door, light and shadows can be seen from under the door, "Oh NO, crap, crap, what did I do, what
did I do?" He says under his breath.
"Did I wake you Ethan?" a female voice says on the other side of the door. Dumbfounded, Ethan stands there trying to recollect what happened. The
door knob begins to turn and Ethan panics trying to put his pants on, stumbling around. When the door opens Daphne is standing there in a silk robe and
lingerie, with a toothbrush in her mouth, smiling. Ethan yanks up his pants leg tripping, falling back hitting his head on her night stand. "Are you
alright?" Daphne asks as she runs over to him. Ethan is laying there rubbing his head, "Ouch! That freaking hurt!"He says. She begins laughing
at him as she helps him up. Embarrassed, he slowly puts his pants on the right way, looking at how beautiful Daphne really was. "Did we...you
know...?" He asks Daphne. She begins laughing hysterically, "No, we didn't, you don't remember, do you?" She replies. Ethan shrugs his
shoulders "I'm sorry, hit my head to many times." He laughs. Smiling at him she says "I asked you to walk me home and on the way we stopped
and rented a movie, you mentioned ghost and goblins, so we rented Ghostbusters. We watched it and you fell asleep, so I took it upon myself and put you in my
bed. My mom wasn't to happy about it, but I told her you were innocent." She explains. "Oh, ok, not that I would of minded, er I mean not that
anything would have happened." He says as he rubs the back of his head.
"Get dress, breakfast is on me, wanna head over to Kip's?" she asks. Ethan begins to say yes until he notices her alarm clock "Aw crap,
the time, I'm late for my exams! Maybe next time?" He says as he rushes to finish getting dressed. "Hey don't forget your cell phone, I
already programmed my number in it, call me later. Oh and thanks for the wonderful Date!" She exclaims as Ethan runs down her stairs and out of her
Ethan runs as fast as he can saying to himself "Run Forest, Run!" He runs and decides to take a short cut through Ravenwood Park. He enters the
park only to see cops everywhere with Ravenwood's CSI taking pictures of what appears to be a crime scene. Ethan slamming on the breaks stumbles over a
branch flipping forward landing at an officer's feet. His cell phone flies out of his hand landing in some nearby bushes. He slowly gets up as the officer
taps his foot. The officer looks at Ethan with suspicion. "Who are you and why are you here?" The officer asks. "Uh, my name is Ethan and I was
just trying to get to class for my exams." The officer walks around Ethan looking him up and down, "Why are you half dressed then, son?" He
asks. "I was over at a friend's house and realized the time." Ethan replies. "Well, your in my crime scene and you don't belong. See,
looks like someone was murdered here last night, follow me." The officer says as he leads Ethan over to a sheet covered in blood. The officer moves the
sheet back revealing a mutilated body, "Do you know this here fella?" The officer asks Ethan. Ethan grabs his mouth with his hand and turns away, the
smell of the torn flesh hits Ethan with extreme force. He turns to look back, "No, I don't know him, what could have done this? He asks the officer.
"Well it looks like he got into a fight with a rabid dog, bobcat or hell, even a wolf maybe." The officer replies back. "Did you happen to be
passing by here at all last night?" The officer asks.
"Honestly, I don't remember, all I know is me and my friend Daphne was walking home together and I went to her place to watch a movie." Ethan
gives his statement. "Really now, then let me ask you about this?"as the officer moves Ethan's shirt collar back revealing scratches. "What
are you talking about, uh, I must of gotten them last night at Daphne's." Ethan replies. "Oh, I'm sorry, you must have been having sex with
this girl Daphne, what's her number and address, so I can see if you alibi is legitimate or not." The officer states. Ethan begins to get upset,
"Frankly, that's none of your business, about my sex life! Besides, you know as well as I do that, that guy was killed by a rabid animal, or
something, clearly I'm not!" "Calm down, kid, just yanking your chain, just leave your name and number with the CSIs and we'll be in touch.
You better hurry on to your exams." Ethan takes of running on to class, when he's almost there he realizes his phone fell back at the park, but he
doesn't have time to get there and to class on time. "I'll get it later." he says as he moves forward at a quick pace.
Ethan stops by the campus bathroom and cleans himself up. He takes of his shirt to splash water on his face and hair. He looks up in the mirror, face and
hair still wet, and begins to look at the scratches on his neck and back. "What the Hell!, surely Daphne wouldn't have lied to me about us doing
anything, would she, stop it Ethan, why do you always have to be so paranoid about everything. Besides, if you did, then you must have been good at it, the
scratches prove it, right?" He thinks to himself and finishes getting cleaned up. Once done he heads to class, totally oblivious to Ben's attempts to
get a hold of him.
The scene ends as he enters the classroom, causing a minor disruption.
Please feel free to leave comments and or suggestions, thanks!
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Shaking off the Dirt
SIR DIDYMUS: IF THAT'S THE WAY IT'S DONE, THEN THAT'S THE WAY YOU MUST DO IT. BUT SHOULD YOU NEED US...
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Destiny's Calling: A Ravenwood Chronicle
Episode 3: "The Frat Party" Summary
Director: Ron McNiel
Cast and Players: Ethan Crane (Ron McNiel), Angelica Cassius (Kati McNiel), Marc Greyson (James Greenway), Eric Raven (Lewis Walker),
Danté Sylvan-Jarrel (Ron McNiel), Benjamin Frost (Ron McNiel),
Jason Knight (Lenny Medina) and Jacquelyn Matthews (Cheryl Medina)
The show opens up with the group searching for Ethan. They find out last Episode that his cell phone's G.P.S. tracking system leads them to Ravenwood
Park, which is also the place they tracked Angelica's mysterious "Help Me" call. When they arrive at the park they see it covered with police and
Ravenwood's CSI. They fear the worse when they approach an officer. They begin to ask questions about what happened there the night before. The officer
informs them that a man was mutilated by a wild animal, possibly a bobcat, dog or wolf. They ask if he has seen their friend as they describe Ethan. The
officer says that he came through the park early in the morning and mentioned that he was on his way to school. The group relaxes as they see it wasn't
their friend that was mutilated. Eric tells the group that they should go wait for Ethan to finish his exams and ask him why he didn't answer his phone.
The group all agree.
When the group gets back to the college they begin to wait outside of Ethan's class when Marc decides to head to the Computer Lab and do some research
on the park. Eric follows along after him. Through his research Marc finds out that there has not been any major incidents really listed online about the park,
so Eric makes the suggestion to look up information within the tabloids. Marc finds all kinds of information, but doesn't believe half of it, although
he's interested in the story titled "The Ghost of Ravenwood Park." He dismisses it after reading through the article. The group notice that many
of the students are now wondering the halls, so they head back to Ethan's classroom. As they approach they see Ethan talking with a dark haired girl. Eric
asks Ethan why he never answered his phone, that they were all worried about him then he realizes that its quite possible that he got lucky the night before.
Ethan introduces everyone to Daphne. Jason then asks Ethan if he was going to go to the Frat party later that night and Ethan tells him "yes." Daphne
says good bye and heads to her next class. Angelica, Jason, Ethan and Ben head to their own classes and finish the day off at school, then they prepare for the
party. Jacquelyn, Dante, Eric and Marc head off to finish their task for the day and then prepare for the party also.
Eric decides to visit Violet at the hospital. When he arrives, he notices that the room she was in earlier that morning was empty so he goes and talks with
the nurse about Violet. The nurse tells him that Violet checked out a few hours after he left, but left her number and address with the nurse for him. He
thanks the nurse then calls Violet. When she answers he asks if she would want to go shopping for a costume with him, she says "yes." Eric spends the
rest of his afternoon with Violet.
Jacquelyn runs home to check on her alcoholic mother, puts her in bed and then heads to the work. She spends the rest of her afternoon working the
"afternoon crowd" at the Hole. Jason calls her up and checks on her to make sure she's OK. Dante goes to a friend's costume shop and asks for
assistance on his costume for the Frat Party. The two consult and Dante comes up with his costume idea. The rest of the day these two stay busy.
Marc goes to his dorm room and calls his insurance company and sets up a meeting with them to go to the pound and take a look at his car and take estimates
on it. The insurance company calls him back and informs him that his car has been totaled out and he should be receiving a check to cover his cost for a new
car. Marc gets excited and goes picks up the check. Looking over it he notices that it was signed by one Lucious Cabot, the guy he hit the night he wrecked his
car and Terry Blake died. Marc was puzzled for a few minutes and said the heck with who signed it, getting himself a new 2009 Dodge Challenger.
The night falls and the group are all getting ready for the Alpha Doma Tau Omega Frat Party. The group meet and decide that they will take two vehicles to
the party; Eric's 2008 Custom Range Rover and Ben's Cadillac Escalade. When Angelica arrives she's hiding her costume under a long hooded cloak and
Jacquelyn's still wearing her Waitress outfit. (Costumes: Eric-Florentine Pirate, Dante-Labyrinth's Goblin King, Ben-Dr. Horrible, Marc-The Terminator,
Ethan-Lestat, Jason-V for Vendetta, Jacquelyn-Work clothes and Angelica-Marilyn Monroe (Iconic White-Dress)). Before they leave they put together a game plan.
Ben says that he'll go snoop around the Frat House for any clues about what goes on or has happened there. The group is to mingle with the other party
goers and keep Yorgon/ Devon and followers busy.
The group arrive at the party and head inside. Once inside they begin to mingle with the other guest. Angelica and Marc go over to the bar and order a drink
and just watch the room. Jacquelyn stands by the front door watching everyone that comes and goes at the Frat house. Ethan begins to work the room chatting it
up with the other guest. Dante begins to talk with a girl dressed as Elvira while Jason hides out brooding in the corner holding his own flask. Ben is looking
around the room for the perfect opportunity to sneak away and investigate the house. Eric catches the eye of a girl dressed like she was from the Victorian
times and she approaches him.
The girl introduces herself as Victoria to Eric, shespeaks with an older dialect of English. They begin to talk about music and such things related to
musical entertainment. She asks Eric to join her outside on the patio, away from the ruckus of the party and he does. When they get out there she asks Eric to
sing to her and give her a sample of his music. He agrees and begins to belt out a dark, tragic love song (Think Stained a tad darker). She is amazed by his
voice and then offers to sing him a song in return. He smiles and tells her he'd love to hear her song. She clears her throat and begins to sing, her voice
is very beautiful, a haunting folklore sound, almost opera like. (Think Evanescence with a Celtic folklore sound). He is mesmerized by her voice and how sad it
sounded as she sung a song telling a story. When she finishes the song she turns her face away from Eric and wipes a tear away from her eye. Eric really takes
a liking to her. In conversation he asks Victoria how she knows Devon. She says that the were an item at one time, a long time ago. She also tells Eric that
they have moved on and are only friends now and the two girls that protect him are his sisters. The moonlight beams down on the two of them as she stares out
into the night sky. He asks if she would like to take a walk and get to know each other better, she agrees and they begin their midnight stroll.
About an hour later, Devon, his two female guards and a few of his band members enter the party. All attention is turned to them (You know that slow motion
walk in entrance). They begin to get surrounded by the masses. Ben takes this opportunity to sneak into the door they just came out of. (He's not seen for
the rest of the night because he's snooping) Marc and Jason watch as the girls enter right behind Devon. Dante preoccupied with Elvira, pretty much is
oblivious to Devon's entrance, as they (Dante and Elvira) wonder up stairs. (Dante's attention is on Elvira and is not seen anymore for the night; Go
Dante! Get your Freak on! Lol.) Ethan is talking with a group of guest telling them stories about his dangerous adventures as a Vampire Prince. Trying to keep
their attention on him so Ben can successfully search around and be nosey.
While Jacquelyn watches the door she is approached by a guy named Derek Chase. He offers her a drink and she refuses, so he asks if she would like to dance
and again she refuses. He apologizes for bugging her but he saw she seemed stressed out so he was trying to offer her relaxation. After several attempts to
talk with her, she decides to listen to him. He tells her a little about himself, revealing that he is a pledge, but is having second thoughts about joining
because a bunch of strange things happening there at the Frat House and it creeps him out, a lot. Jacquelyn now interested, asks Derek to go outside with her
so they can talk in private, just in case there are some Frat guys listening in. He agrees, so she positions themselves in an area that is highly trafficked
and she can keep an eye inside the house.
A few moments pass and the two Goth girls approach Marc and Jason. They start having conversations and a few minutes later find themsleves attracted to the
two girls. The girls ask if they would like to dance and both agree and dance with them. The girls now seperated ask each of the guys for their real name, Marc
is the only one that tells his name, while Jason plays on the whole V for Vendetta mystique. The girls finally reveal their names to the guys. The girl with
Marc is named Terra Eisely and is extremely interested in Marc's racing. She explains how the adrenaline that pumps through the veins highten her sexual
drive leaving Marc's mind to wonder. They begin to talk more about his races on Widow's Lane as they dance. Jason continues to play on the mysterious
stranger act even though the girl tells him her name is Starr Eisely. As they dance they get closer until she kisses him. Jason's emotions begin to take
hold as he gives in to her embrace. Starr leads Jason up some stairs and through a closed door. (This is the last we see Jason and Starr for the night) Back on
the dance floor Marc and Terra are still dancing when she pulls him close to her and begins to whisper into his ear. Marc is startled at first but goes with
the flow and as she moves in for a kiss which he gladly accepts. She asks him to follow her and he does, mesmorized by her beauty. She leads him up stairs and
through a closed door on the opposite side of the hall that Starr lead Jason. The doors closed at both rooms and they begin to fade away into passion.
Devon notices that Angelica is all alone and approaches her. He tells her that he is glad she came and she agrees. he then proceeds to tell her how
beautiful she looks as Marilyn Monroe. She blushes a little and then realizes that he is hitting on her. She begins to change her demeanor a bit. He takes
notice and changes his demeanor letting his guard down. Devon is intrigued with Angelica because she doesn't fall head over heels for him like most girls
do. He opens up to her telling him that he is tired of the Frat life. She begins to take a small intrest in the real Devon. He offers her a drink from what
appears to be a silver chalice with runic carvings on it, when Jacquelyn watching from out side sends a text to Angelica. Angelica gets a funny look from Devon
as she reaches into her braw removing her cell phone and opens it. Devon smiles as he turns his attention to Ethan who seems to be having fun telling the other
guest about his adventures. When Angelica opens the phone she notices that the message is from Jacquelyn and it states "Don't drink from that cup, it
could be how they got Violet!" Angelica nods at Jacquelyn and turns her phone off putting it away asking Devon "Where were we?" He turns his
attention back to her and he asks if she would like to join him outside, she arches her eyebrow and he replies "For a smoke". She smiles and agrees
as the go out to the patio that Victoria and Eric were just at. Their conversation continues as he reveals more about himself and his bossy sisters. Angelica
actually enjoys their conversation as they get to know each other.
Meanwhile in the room where Marc and Terra are, they can be seen making love. It is really intense as they continue constantly. Marc is so exausted that he
just lays back and lets Terra do all of the work. He smiles as he enjoys everything she has attempted and done to him.
Back at the party one of the Frat brothers begins searching for Devon. Devon is still outside enjoying his conversation with Angelica when the Frat brother
finds him and whispers something into his ear. Angelica watches as close as she can with out leading on that she's eaves dropping. Devon and his Frat
brother step inside and begin talking, Angelica watches from the patio and sees whatever he was told upset him or made him angry. Devon then turns to her
approaching her saying he apologizes for his interruption but something begs his attention with the Frat. He asks if she would like to join him the next day
around 11:30 a.m. for a coffee at Starbuck's and then go with him to the Library for research and she agrees. She starts to think that maybe Ben got caught
snooping around the house. She fittles with her phone and sends Ben a text, he replies back saying he'll catch up, he found something.
Devon and his Frat brothers tells everyone that the party is over and its time to go. The guest including Ethan all leave. Victoria and Eric are taklking
when something catches her attention, Eric asks if everything was OK, and she says yes, but she just realized the time and has to get back to the party. Eric
says no problem as they head back to the Frat House. Once there Eric asks if he can see her again and she says yes, that their are many things to discuss about
working together on a song. Eric heads to his car and waits for those that rode with him. Angelica meets up with him and waits for Ethan, Jason, Dante,
Jacquelyn, Marc and Ben.
Marc and Terra are making passionate love as he begins to lose consciousness from exhaustion. His eyes are blurry when he hears someone kick open the door
of the room and sees Devon rush in grabbing Terra by the hair jerking her head back revealing yellow glowing cat-like eyes and a mouth full of fangs as he
To Be Continued
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